"Intersectional fourth wave feminism; is technology and the internet beneficial or detrimental to current female zine culture?"
Research methods:
- WIDE RANGE!!!!
- books: look up "all the rebel women; rise of the fourth wave of feminism"
- first hand, interviews with people that make zines and other female creators
- journals and online
Tone of voice:
- overall, impassioned and personable
- clearly the subject matter means a lot and is personal to the writer, which I like
- feels not too scientific or overly scholarly
- however, some sentences are overly packed with sophisticated vocabulary so that it is hard to understand in places
Clarity:
- as mentioned before some words and phrases could be taken out to avoid over complicating it
- quite rambling in places which makes it hard to remember the point thats being made
- but thoroughly researched and well rationed
Flow:
- the general 'chapters' are easily divided up into a few smaller categories which is good
- however the interview sections towards the end is slightly harder to understand, doesn't totally fit the flow of the essay
- smaller chunks easier to understand
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